Revising our Personal Narrative story by adding more description

There's nothing worse than a story that is bland and that lacks flavor.  Instead, we love to read stories with fun, exciting, and meaningful descriptions.  With great description of people, places, and items, our stories will come alive.  Remember how the procedure works:

1) Mark off the place where you can add more description in your story with a D1 or D2, depending on what description you're adding to.  You should go to at least D8.

2) On the back of your story page, write D1 or whatever description that you're expanding, then add in your detail.